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Inside of meI amOutside of meAnd beside myselfLike tables turnedIn a familiar roomI bash myselfAnd bruisedSearch for something I knowI hope I recognise it.
Inside of meI amOutside of meAnd beside myself
Like tables turnedIn a familiar roomI bash myselfAnd bruisedSearch for something I know
I hope I recognise it.
By Heather Sergeant
I like it. How old is Heather?
"A Poem" is a crummy title, though; in most good poetry, the title sets the mood for what is to follow. Now, of course, I can't pretend to know what was in her mind, but some ideas come to mind:
Inside a Klein bottle
Return of the labyrinth
Encourage her to come up with a good title. It's harder than it first appears. ;-)
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